I didn't look much further, because it seems to me what you're trying to do
can be better accomplished by using the highlight plugin. Assuming the raw
file you want to inline and comment on is some source-code-like thing,
-which seems likely. --[[Joey]] [[!tag reviewed]]
+which seems likely.
+
+Or, another way to do it would be to use the templates plugin, and make
+a template there that puts an inline directive inside pre tags.
+ --[[Joey]] [[!tag reviewed]]